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  • Shahbaz

    October 11, 2021 at 12:30 PM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7800

    *whereas + ‘on the other hand’ in the same sentence could be redundant.

    *’discuss about’ is unnecessary. ‘discuss’ can be used without ‘about’ (“discuss an issue”)

    * ” a company possess” It should be “possesses” .
    * Some word choices can be improved. Overall, there is good control over sentence structure and punctuation.


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