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  • Shahbaz

    October 11, 2021 at 12:36 PM

    * A couple of incorrect word choices (they didn’t fit well in the sentences) – indulge,

    * I wouldn’t use ‘let us see’ in the thesis statement. Check out a few thesis statements in sample essays.

    *Problems with plural nouns . “make decision” in second paragraph should be ‘decisions’

    *’underestimate’ is written as a single word, no space.

    * In the conclusion, you probably meant ‘better not to include juniors’


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