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* to an only higher level –> to higher levels only
*”I believe employees’ views taken into consideration while making any decision for the company.” Perhaps you meant ‘should be taken into’
*Passive voice error “that employees should include” —> “should be included”
“should not overlook” —> “should not be overlooked”
*(missing comma) before ‘then’ in “if they are also included in decision – making process then[,] it will help the organisation in achieving the right decision.”
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