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  • Abhinav

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    October 12, 2021 at 9:57 PM
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    Activity Points 3920

    However I completely disagree with this..

    No grammatical errors to mention here, however the sentence complexity is not enough. There were a lot of opportunities to join multiple sentences together that you missed. For example:

    To begin with I strongly believe in the notion that if people are not satisfied with the job it would affect their mental peace that I can cooperate with the situation that happened to me in my first job where I did not get the role I desired but the company offered me a handsome salary for a different role which ultimately I took……(no break required)

    “Use more lexical resources”

    Use more cohesive devices to start the paragraph.

    Band score weightage: 4.0/6.0

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