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* “even though more adults have” – The use of ‘more’ in this sentence changes the meaning a bit. I shall elaborate in the class.
*Please review the use of ” argue the advantages”
* “will be gaining more experience” – I think ‘would gain more experience’ is better.
* Please review ‘In addition to it’ , I am only familiar with ‘In addition to that’ and ‘In addition’* ‘Now a days’ is written as a single word -> ‘nowadays’
* ‘old age homes are getting increased.’ / ‘are increasing in number’ would be better.
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