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* Please review ‘maximum adults’
* In the first sentence ,it should be ‘despite having completed’ . Check out some sentence examples with ‘despite’
* The first sentence in the second paragraph is not clear. The comparison seems incomplete. Please review the sentence.
* ” can be balanced these responsibilities” — ‘can balance these responsivities’
* ‘which face by them’ –> ‘problems which they face’ or perhaps ‘problems which are faced by them’
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