FalakAdministratorOctober 16, 2021 at 9:55 AM
people raise objections about banning about the blood sports as it is a brutal game ( people agree to the idea of prohibiting such brutal activities)
an inappropriate way of earning ( attaining) the entertainment
This means ( to elaborate)
the engagement of (animals in ) such sports is somehow( clearly projects inhumanity prevailing in the society) level of inhumanity
Feedback : work on handwriting , some words are not even legible, stick to formal words. Proof read is must to avoid silly mistakes. Keep writing!
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