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  • Falak

    Administrator
    October 16, 2021 at 9:55 AM
    260 Network Points
    Activity Points 5850

    people raise objections about banning about the blood sports as it is a brutal game ( people agree to the idea of prohibiting such brutal activities)

    an inappropriate way of earning ( attaining) the entertainment

    This means ( to elaborate)

    the engagement of (animals in ) such sports is somehow( clearly projects inhumanity prevailing in the society) level of inhumanity

    someone(‘s) entertainment

    Feedback : work on handwriting , some words are not even legible, stick to formal words. Proof read is must to avoid silly mistakes. Keep writing!

    Band : 3.5/6

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