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  • Shahbaz

    October 16, 2021 at 11:59 AM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7690

    *”and it’s (its) impact on individuals and society.”

    * Some adjectives and adverbs sound a bit unusual with the nouns that they accompany e.g. “prevalently popular”.

    *”thus getting more inclined towards shopping

    * I assume that the sentence starting with “While shopping can be used as” was meant to be a part of the second body paragraph and not a separate paragraph.

    *”If one beings mindful of their spending” (the ‘beings’ in this sentence does not seem correct. Perhaps you meant ‘If one is mindful…”


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