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*”and it’s (its) impact on individuals and society.”
* Some adjectives and adverbs sound a bit unusual with the nouns that they accompany e.g. “prevalently popular”.
*”thus getting more inclined towards shopping
* I assume that the sentence starting with “While shopping can be used as” was meant to be a part of the second body paragraph and not a separate paragraph.
*”If one beings mindful of their spending” (the ‘beings’ in this sentence does not seem correct. Perhaps you meant ‘If one is mindful…”
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