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* Make sure you use ‘more’ only when there is an obvious or implied comparison. “She is more intelligent than him”. Using it in a sentence where the comparison is not obvious can cause confusion like “People are more obsessed to groom themselves.” Perhaps, in these sentences you should be using intensifiers like ‘really’ .
* The verb ‘obsess’ is usually used with ‘with’ e.g. “He is obsessed with ….”
* Please look up ‘dress’ vs ‘clothes’ , in the third sentence of the first body paragraph, ‘clothes’ or ‘attire’ would have been more apt than ‘dress’.
* ‘On line’ — ‘online’
*”So many businesses has been” (have been)
*If ‘showcase’ is used as a verb, it’s written without any space in between.
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