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  • Shahbaz

    Administrator
    October 16, 2021 at 1:04 PM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7800

    * “pros and cons effects” does not collocate well.
    * The use of ‘enable’ in the second sentence of the first body paragraph is incorrect. Perhaps, you meant to say ‘people are able to’.

    *”online marketing influence individual” (online marketing influences individuals… )

    *”if a person is purchased luxury items” (if a person purchases…)

    *”people, who do not want to buy useless things, have” – The commas here were not necessary at all. Look up ‘relative clause when to use commas)

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