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  • Falak

    October 20, 2021 at 9:59 AM
    280 Network Points
    Activity Points 6270

    Introduction : It should not be just the background related to topic , but paraphrasing , thesis and outline statement needs to be there

    the older one gets the more medical attention they require (they require more medical attention)

    The older one gets the more medical attention they require. Hence, they require a considerable amount of medical and emotional attention. : Avoid being repetitive by just rephrasing the structure.

    Feedback : Use cohesive devices to add more clarity . No example found

    Band : 2.5/6

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