AdministratorOctober 20, 2021 at 6:39 PM
inevitable means=something that can not be stopped from happening…..Proper word should be = imperative/pivotal
The last sentence of the first body paragraph: Imagine how the doctor would feel…
Other than that, no more things to point out….commendable use of lexical resources and sentence complexity.
Band Score: 5.5/6.0