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  • Shahbaz

    Administrator
    October 21, 2021 at 3:39 PM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7800

    * When you wish to emphasize that only few people want to do something, ‘a few people..’ will not convey that idea fully.

    “In the recent time, a few people want to choose their career as teacher” (In recent times, very few people want to chose a career in teaching)

    * “in the past” is better than “in past time”

    * “children into a better person” (children into better people / a child into a better person)

    * Look up ‘less’ vs ‘fewer’

    *”Parents also teach their children some basic etiquettes for example” (parents should also teach…)

    Overall, I believe this essay had fewer errors than the ones I checked before. You could work a bit more on organizing the ideas and the conclusion paragraph.

    4.5/6

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