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Feedback: well approached with good use of cohesive devices, need to work on grammatical errors as found in Introduction, BP 1, & Conclusion. Try to avoid repetition as found “Less” word is used more than one.
Band: 3.5/6
Feedback: well approached with good use of cohesive devices, need to work on grammatical errors as found in Introduction, BP 1, & Conclusion. Try to avoid repetition as found “Less” word is used more than one.
Band: 3.5/6
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