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  • Falak

    Administrator
    October 25, 2021 at 8:59 AM

    Feedback : Avoid personal pronouns especially in introduction

    Every people ( is wrong usage as every is singular in usage)

    By this way people (are) suffering

    By this way people suffering economically and also the growth of nation deteriorates.(maintain parallelism; either keep both ideas in continuous form or indefinite)

    Solutions (as asked in question ) should be in distinct paragraph , not in conclusion.

    stick to Task-2 structure.

    Work on sentence structure

    Band : 2/6

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