AdministratorOctober 25, 2021 at 9:37 AM280 Network PointsActivity Points 6270
it (is) also the reason
let’s discuss (informal)
Firstly, because of(of not required) everyone is known to English language
it is also a benefit (beneficial)
India is one of the most popular tourist country(countries)
Feedback : Need to work on sentence formation and grammatical skills. Usage of cohesive devices is not convincing. Logical connection among sentences is missing.
Band : 1.5/6