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* ‘light on the dire need..’
* I feel that ‘on behalf of the government’ cannot be used when you mean ‘from the government’ .
Your vocabulary is quite extensive and your grammatical control is excellent. However, there are a couple of word choices which sound a bit unusual. They don’t cause any confusion.
* ‘make our existence on Earth smoother‘
‘reserve secrets and mysteries’
‘reach out to valuable data’
5/6
