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  • Shahbaz

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    October 25, 2021 at 12:54 PM
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    * ‘the children who prefer to take a break between their studies after completing school have many positive sides.’ (‘The children…have positive sides’ is a bit odd. I would say ‘Taking a break has many positive sides’ or ‘ The children… enjoying many benefits)

    * ‘disconnected with education and could not focus on higher studies.’ (and cannot focus)
    * ‘behind of their classmates’ (behind their classmates)

    * ‘of free time that they have before.’ (Did you mean ‘the free time that they did not have before’ ?)

    * Two sentences started with a small letter. ‘on the other hand’

    4.5/6

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