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  • Shahbaz

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    October 28, 2021 at 11:45 AM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7670

    * This is a better first paragraph : “I recently came across an advertisement for a training
    course that I think would be really useful for
    my professional development. I’m writing to explain why I think it would be a great course for me to do” .

    * I don’t understand why you capitalized ‘scrum’ and ’email’.

    * ‘it will be ease for’ (easy) – look up ‘easy’ vs ‘ease’

    I recommend reading good sample letters to familiarize yourself with the various expressions we use to make requests etc.

    Score: 4/6

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