ShahbazAdministratorOctober 30, 2021 at 12:47 PM
* ‘regarding my job in your’ ( I would use ‘regarding a job…’ because it is not something you have right now)
* ‘Last Sunday, when we were going from Pune to Delhi’ ( Usually when we use ‘when’ to introduce a clause, the other clause is in the same sentence. Here, you wrote it as a second sentence after a full stop)
* ‘As you have been related to this field’ ( I think ‘As you have been in this field’ is better)
Most of the sentences were structurally sound and error-free.
Score : 5/6