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  • Shahbaz

    October 30, 2021 at 1:00 PM

    * “I got a job offer in New York, so I’ll be moving” ( I think a comma after New York makes the sentence more readable)
    * ‘I have a three sitter sofa made of latex, it’s very comfortable and soft, I’m sure you you will like it.’ ( I would have either made the last part of the sentence a separate sentence or connected it with ‘and’ ‘comfortable and soft and I’m sure you…’ )
    * ‘one of its legs
    * ‘occupied with the packing the stuffs’ (‘with the packing the stuffs’ is not correct. I would use ‘occupied with packing all my stuff) (‘stuff’ is used with the plural ‘s’ when we talk about unspecified belongings)
    * ‘Please free to drop’ (feel free)
    *’Even if, I’m not available’ (no comma needed here ‘Even if I’m not…’)
    * ‘ furniture’s’ (why the possessive ‘s’ here? )

    Score : 4.5/6 (Although there is a lot of precise informal vocabulary used naturally, the errors are more than just a few)

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