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* Please look up ‘less’ vs ‘few’ and ‘lesser’ vs ‘fewer’. ‘Lesser people’ and ‘fewer people’ are not the same.
* Your sentences generally are structurally sound. If you notice that there is time for proofreading, I recommend reviewing your word choices. You must also reread your own essays and look up and confirm the correctness of any words or expressions that do not sound correct.
By word choice problems, I mean things like ‘In order to curb this situation’ – I do not think that we can ever say ‘curb a situation’ in the same way that we say ‘solve this situation’ or ‘fix this situation’
Score : 5.5/6
