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  • Shahbaz

    November 2, 2021 at 9:43 AM

    * ‘the sport’ ( Since we are talking about sports in general, ‘sports’ would be better here without ‘the’)
    * ‘men have been thinking’ (this tense is not appropriate here – please look up ‘stative verbs’ and also ‘I think vs I am thinking’)
    * ‘and they only have the right’ (and only they have the right)
    * ‘the government hardly promotes sports related to females and provides them a platform to prove themselves.’ (Please look up ‘and/or in negative sentences’)
    * ‘who participate in any sport feel inferior as the reason they dropped out.’ ( what you meant is ‘and as a result they drop out’ . I’m not sure if ‘as they reason’ can work here. The tense in ‘dropped out’ is wrong, it should be ‘drop out’ because we are talking about something general here)

    Score : 4.5/6

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