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* ‘Same style of all the houses in an area have many merits’ ( ‘has many…’ because the subject is ‘same style’)
*I’m not sure about “the new house” in the first line. I would have gone with ‘new houses’ without changing it.
Score : 5/6
Most of the sentences were error-free. The task was addressed satisfactorily and there is good sequencing of ideas although it can still be improved. There is room for improvement in vocabulary also, but the word choice was mostly very natural and accurate.
