ShahbazAdministratorNovember 7, 2021 at 5:52 PM
* It is not common to use ‘so that’ at the beginning of a new sentence with the meaning of ‘in order to’
* ‘ from Japanese language to English.’ I would just go with ‘from Japanese to English’ since the context makes it clear that you are referring to the language.
Score : 5/6
The ideas in the bullet points were developed very well. Great error-free sentences.