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  • Shahbaz

    Administrator
    November 8, 2021 at 12:46 PM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7670

    * ‘Nowadays, people use ‘

    * ‘This essay will explore the ideas, why reviews of customers are’ [ ‘the ideas, why reviews… are…’ does not sound right at all. It could have been ‘explore why reviews…are…’ or even ‘ideas related to why reviews…are… ]

    * ‘In addition to that, Good and bad’ (no reason to capitalize ‘good’)

    * The vocabulary was mostly error-free. However, it could have been improved quite a lot. Some expressions like ‘they can make their mind clear’ are not very natural even though they convey the meaning well.

    Score : 4.5/6

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