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* ‘Nowadays, people use ‘
* ‘This essay will explore the ideas, why reviews of customers are’ [ ‘the ideas, why reviews… are…’ does not sound right at all. It could have been ‘explore why reviews…are…’ or even ‘ideas related to why reviews…are… ]
* ‘In addition to that, Good and bad’ (no reason to capitalize ‘good’)
* The vocabulary was mostly error-free. However, it could have been improved quite a lot. Some expressions like ‘they can make their mind clear’ are not very natural even though they convey the meaning well.
Score : 4.5/6
