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Visitors do not follow these traditions…
Women wear black clothes which cover their whole body…
So that they do not suffer any discrimination…
Travelling to those countries which impose strict regulations…
Related to their customs—repeated phrase…
Feedback: structure is sound and clear. Need to work upon your grammatical accuracy. All the errors mentioned above are very simple things to look out for.
Band Score: 6.5/9.0 :
Weightage for actual score: 4.0/6.0
