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Some of them believe that they must know..
Who visits any country must be aware of the culture…
Before they visit the place they must be aware of the culture
If somebody plans to visit Russia
Too much about the other country’s culture..
You cannot drink alcohol as/since it’s against the culture
Feedback: its structure is good enough however there are so many grammatical errors that we need to take care of. Also you need to work upon your lexical resources and sentence complexity. Grammar range also needs a lot of work, need to try and make more complex and compound sentences with some linking words.
Band score: 6.0/9.0
Band score actual weightage: 3.5/6.0
