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Different social practises in different countries and (use of which does not create a grammatically correct sentence) it is extremely difficult for one person to follow all of them…
Country is usually known for the traditions and culture…
Feedback: written with proper structure and good command over the language, however they were few grammatical errors mentioned above make sure not to do them once again. Lexical resources are utilised properly and there is enough complexity in the sentences.
Tip: Could use more linking words and complicated conjunctions to improve the quality of the sentences.
Band score: 7.5/9.0.
Mind score actual weightage: 5.0/6.0
