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* ‘ I want to need it to be translated into English.’ ( ‘I want to need it’ is incorrect. ‘I want it translated’ would be much better. or ‘I would like them translated into…)
* I am not sure about ‘looking for hearing from you’.
‘Looking forward to hearing’ is common.
* ‘I am working’ and ‘I work’ are both grammatically correct , but they have different meanings. I suggest you look it up to get a clearer idea.
Score : 5.25/6 (The letter covers the requirements of the task. The tone is appropriate. The bullet points were developed properly and the purpose was clearly stated. There were a few sentences which could have been improved. However, generally speaking, the sentences were mostly error-free)
