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* ‘about your new assignment that you are planning to construct new houses in that area.’ (I feel that a comma should have come after the first ‘that’ )
* ‘ my society’ (In Indian English, it is very common to use ‘society’ when we mean ‘housing society’ . This use of the word is not well-known outside of India. So, I would use ‘housing society’ to avoid any confusions)
* ‘living with family’ (their family)
Score : 2.25/3 ( The bullet points were well-developed. The language can be improved even further )
