ShahbazAdministratorNovember 12, 2021 at 11:09 AM
* “Well , I have experienced”
The interjection ‘well’ might not be suitable in a task 2 essay. It’s obviously very common in spoken language.
* The choice of words is very unusual at time.
* A few instances of issues with capitalization and use of commas.
Score : 4/6