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* ‘plays a prominent role in the products that are purchased through the internet.’ (plays a prominent in the purchase of products through the internet)
* ‘ would make an online purchaser’s life easy to make decision.’
(the last part of the sentence is not complete)
* ‘ Furthermore, making online purchases would save a lot of travel time, energy, cost, and within the comfort of home.’ (The last part of the sentence does not fit well with its first part)
Vocabulary and Word Choice
“buy the product which includes effort, cost, and time.”
“This would not only expose one’s feedback”
Some word choices sound a bit unnatural. They might be the result of an attempt to avoid repetition. It is important to remember that our vocabulary needs to natural.
Score : 4.5/6
