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* There are some word choices which are probably not completely accurate. For example, the ‘interest’ in ‘it is individual’s interest to choose their location’ . Perhaps, ‘it is an individual’s right’ is better.
* There are many error-free sentences. Compared to some of the essays you posted before, this one has very few mistakes as such.
*’As every individual have their’ (has) [ when ‘every’ is used with a noun, we treat it as a singular noun]
* ‘none of them can interfere while choosing their place to work’ ( I think here you meant to say ‘nobody should interfere with their right to choose their…’. Please read the sentence again )
* ‘it is not fare to force anyone to choose their location to work’
(it is not fair to force anyone to choose their location of work)
Score : 4.5/6
