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  • Falak

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    November 25, 2021 at 11:04 PM
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    Feedback :

    Write essay as per the structure recommended for IELTS (as discussed in class).

    Introduction should have paraphrasing sentence and outlining statement .

    Try to avoid the use of pronouns like (I, you, we , your, our) until your opinion has been asked. Keep it general and formal style of writing .

    advantages and disadvantages should be presented in distinct paragraphs , avoid overlapping of ideas.

    I would advise to reattempt the essay .

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