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its (it’s) unwanted (futile) use of time
art subjects don’t have future (future career prospects)
One can’t survey (survive)
Inclusive of (Including arts in school curriculum) arts sometimes made the children (pressurized and burdened) to be in a pressurize their schedule
subjects for (to) acquire
frequently (evidently) students’ performance may gets impacted
In B.P 1; explanation of topic sentence is missing
In B.P 2 : Topic sentence is missing
work on sentence structure . Keep practicing!!
Band : 2.5/6
