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  • Falak

    December 7, 2021 at 11:36 AM

    Feedback : Verbosity has been observed, repetitive usage of words and sentence structure is also the concern.

    Lexical resources need to be improved, cohesion is another area which requires attention as discussed in class.

    I would suggest to make required changes as discussed.

    Band : 3/6

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