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as it motivates (them) to children.
“I” always should be capitalized
(being) rewarded is a greater (more helpful) than (getting) punished (
it can leads a child (to lose confidence ) to lack of confidence.
student who have (got) punished in school
In smaller age (younger age)
which cause (make) them
Furthermore, adults can also encourage students how they can impress teacher – not very convinced with explanation and found it irrelevant
need to work on conclusion as well , try to sum up things that have been discussed in paragraphs
Sentence structure, word forms , lexical resources , cohesion all things require attention .
Band : 2/6
