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Newspaper is one of the most traditional way (ways) of reading news.
several of old age people are habitat (habitual) of reading news paper (newspaper)
According to them (,) they can not start there (their) day
There are several ways to gather latest news (with convenience) in very convienent ways
Examples are missing.
Conclusion should be in adherence with inrtoduction , do mention newspaper too.
Make use of punctuation marks.
Band: 3/6
