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  • Falak

    December 20, 2021 at 12:42 PM

    Make more use of cohesive devices, it will add more cohesive to the piece

    No example found in second body paragraph; also the second B.P should look like your discussing what “others” believe rather your own opinion

    conclusion should be more effective ; talks about both ideas and your stand on the argument.

    Band : 3.5/6

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