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devloped (developed)
we will discuss ( this essay will discuss)
curb ( tackle) this issue
Topic sentence of B.P 1 is highlighting the causes of aging population ( question is what problems are arising due to this)
some of the words are not legible, handwriting should be clear.
Example in B.P 1 is missing
The problem can be solved by immigrating people (migrating)
Feedback : The answer is not what question is demanding.
Band: 2.5/6
