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  • Falak

    December 21, 2021 at 12:32 PM

    devloped (developed)

    we will discuss ( this essay will discuss)

    curb ( tackle) this issue

    Topic sentence of B.P 1 is highlighting the causes of aging population ( question is what problems are arising due to this)

    some of the words are not legible, handwriting should be clear.

    Example in B.P 1 is missing

    The problem can be solved by immigrating people (migrating)

    Feedback : The answer is not what question is demanding.

    Band: 2.5/6

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