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youngsters (can) avoid the situation
who know the importance of money management can save enough money to help their parents( (in many aspects) in their higher education expenses.
Feedback : Sentence structure is essay is not convincing , try to use wide variety especially subordinate clauses will help you to make your writing more effective. Example in body paragraph 1 , is missing.
Band : 3.5/6