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  • Falak

    December 29, 2021 at 12:40 AM

    youngsters (can) avoid the situation

    who know the importance of money management can save enough money to help their parents( (in many aspects) in their higher education expenses.

    Feedback : Sentence structure is essay is not convincing , try to use wide variety especially subordinate clauses will help you to make your writing more effective. Example in body paragraph 1 , is missing.

    Band : 3.5/6

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