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  • Falak

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    December 29, 2021 at 9:40 AM
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    a lot of Dine-ins is (are) being opened

    There are a lot of international food programs from (T.V) channels

    which showcases (showcase) talents, – as the subject is programs (plural)

    Global networks enable trading and advertising a walk in the park, these ( making) make raw materials accessible.

    ,

    many might argue this is due to better health care, but (I found “but” is inappropriate here) it is seen that they seldom get sick,

    Feedback : Well- written essay with examples and explanations. Be careful with the points mentioned above.

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