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a lot of Dine-ins is (are) being opened
There are a lot of international food programs from (T.V) channels
which showcases (showcase) talents, – as the subject is programs (plural)
Global networks enable trading and advertising a walk in the park, these ( making) make raw materials accessible.
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many might argue this is due to better health care, but (I found “but” is inappropriate here) it is seen that they seldom get sick,
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