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china. (China) – proper noun
clothing, medicine and household goods was (were) least in the expenditure.
medicine was comprised of 4% from the entire budget in 1995 which increased by 5% (7%) in 2011.- Read and analyze the data carefully
While there was an increase in the expenditure of some goods, others showed a slight decrease (unclear statement )
With regards to decrease, expenditure on clothing was 19% in 1995 which shows a minimal 1% of decrease in 2011(18%) ( The amount of expenditure had decreased in clothing with marginal difference of 1% in 2011 as compared to 19% in 1995) – Range in sentence structure , avoid monotonous sentence structure.
it shows (showed) a 9% decrease from 1995 to 2011. – maintain the tense throughout.
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