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  • Falak

    Administrator
    January 16, 2022 at 10:46 AM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 27170

    Body paragraph 2 and 3 should be put together as paragraphing needs to be maintained , putting them together will avoid the negative feature of underdeveloped paragraphs.

    Essay is well- written with logical sequence and usage of lexical resources seem to be effortless.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 4.5/6

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