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a similar complaint has been raised by our neighbor to (in) my adjacent apartment.
my kid’s school are (is) online
the same issue was noticed last year. (Therefore,) I request to take immediate action to change this device and test the unit for its operation.
Just mention , how others are getting affected with it as it is problem to whole area (second bullet point) and first bullet point needs to be bit more elaborated.
Paragraphing has been done well. Be careful with minor slips.
Keep writing!!
Band: 1.5/3
