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  • Falak

    Administrator
    January 16, 2022 at 9:56 PM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 26550

    a similar complaint has been raised by our neighbor to (in) my adjacent apartment.

    my kid’s school are (is) online

    the same issue was noticed last year. (Therefore,) I request to take immediate action to change this device and test the unit for its operation.

    Just mention , how others are getting affected with it as it is problem to whole area (second bullet point) and first bullet point needs to be bit more elaborated.

    Paragraphing has been done well. Be careful with minor slips.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 1.5/3

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