AdministratorJanuary 18, 2022 at 10:14 PM660 Network PointsActivity Points 27170
ashiyana. (Ashiyana – proper noun)
Since past 5 days (,)
While answering the bullet point 2, explain how others are suffering (question demands)
this ongoing connectivity issues (issue)
Make use of punctuation to increase the readability otherwise band score will not go beyond 5 in Grammatical range and accuracy.
Sentence structure could be more effective. (sometimes found monotonous and repetitive)