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There are different perspectives (It is argued by some ….) –
people thinks (think)
I will support both the statements in the essay. (your opinion as demanded in question needs to be mentioned in introduction)
collecting garbage different for biodegradable and non-biodegradable waste, and recycling the waste- sentence seems to be incomplete as cohesion has not been established clearly.
bikes to stop the (emission of) harmful gases
certainly, great improvement can be observed. Keep writing!!!
Band: 3.5/6