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  • Falak

    Administrator
    January 30, 2022 at 7:55 PM
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    Budgeting classes in school is (are) very crucial

    , Budgeting classes in school is very crucial as its consequences on toddlers could either be positive or negative. (sentence is ambiguous, lacking clarity)

    although your essay is of 255 words which is meeting the requirement ,I would advise to extend ideas bit more

    Keep writing!!

    Band:4/6

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