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Hi Sir, (Dear Mr. X): semi-formal letter
I am writing this letter to apologize for my absence…… ( suggested opening line)
I am extremely sorry for not being able to attend this crucial event (you could add details of the events)
Since it is (was) the educational event
knowledge gathered from here can be used for the good (of) on our project
I still can be able to get information (can and able serving the same purpose , better choose either can or able)
I’ll get in touch with the people who attend (attended) the event
Your faithful (since the salutation is Dear Mr. X, closure would be Yours sincerely)
while referring about events , there is lot of “here” and “there” , I would advise to maintain the clarity throughout. Make use of punctuation while using cohesive devices
Band: 1.5/3
